Descriptions Part 1

I am currently working on writing better descriptions, showing verses telling, and so I’d like to share a teeny bit with you. I would love to know if reading this small clip evokes any kind of feelingĀ and if so what? What do you feel? What do you think might occur next? If you feel inclined please leave me some feedback. I would greatly appreciate that. Here we go…

Golden rays of sunlight drifted through the sheer white curtains of the bay window filling the room in a blanket of warmth as they gently kissed Aaleahya’s face and teased her eyelids open. Had the spring rains washed away the dismal gray clouds and morphed into summer at long last? Rising from her bed, she rushed to the window, pushing the curtains aside and there high in the sky the sun greeted her like an old friend ready for adventure.

Oh and umm, Happy Valentine’s Day!!! What is your most romantic memory? Love stories are simply the best, don’t you think?


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1 Comment

  • April

    There, high in the sky,

    I could definitely envision the scene! I almost picture a light green room and the beach outside the window.

    February 15, 2017 at 10:15 pm Reply
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